Term Paper Instructions

These term paper instructions are taken from Phys 105 at UVa  taught by Professor Lou Bloomfield.
I have edited them a little as possible so that the rules for your paper are the same as UVa students.

Goals for the Term Paper:

This course is designed to provide you with a broad, general understanding of the physics of your everyday world. I can think of no better way to put what you have learned into practice, and thus solidify that understanding, than to do what I do: explain the physics of an everyday object or situation. This paper is an educational exercise and you will get out of it no more than you put into it. I don't expect you to turn in the finest paper that anyone can write on some sophisticated, impenetrable topic; I expect you to turn in the finest paper that you can write, with your own mind and hands, on a topic that you really care about. I hope that in the end, you will be proud of what you've accomplished and learned in the process of writing this paper. It's not a lengthy assignment, but it takes time and thought. If you give it a chance, you'll construct something valuable to you.

Basic Concept of the Term Paper:

Your term paper should be 1500 to 1750 words long (the equivalent of approximately 5 double-spaced, typewritten pages), not counting citations or pictures. Your paper should focus on one object or situation from the world around you and identify within that object several different physical concepts that make the object what it is. You should describe what these physical concepts are and how they contribute to the behavior of the object. Well chosen objects will involve physical concepts that range from mechanics to electricity to heat to optics. However, avoid an object that is so broad that you can only describe a tiny piece of it. The paper should feel complete to the reader.

You should be able to cover the main structure of the object in enough detail to make the reader feel like you actually understand "how it works" overall. Your paper should cover a number of different physical issues relating to your object, rather than "beating to death" one or two of those issues. Avoid unnecessary repetition. The grade you receive will reflect how well your paper conveys an overall understanding of how the object works, including a fair amount of specificity. Don't be vague or mushy. In the physical world, there really are correct and incorrect statements. Vague statements that can be misinterpreted in a way that makes them incorrect are not helpful. Please check your grammar and spelling, and proofread your papers. Bad writing will reduce your grade.

For example, imagine that you were writing a paper on a wind surfer. You should note that its behavior involves buoyancy (it floats), drag (it has a top speed), friction (your feet stay on it), inclined planes (the keel and sail), and various forces (the wind, your arms, the water on the keel). You should describe how these various concepts create the specific behavior you see in the wind surfer (e.g. how buoyancy keeps the board from sinking and what changes in the buoyancy, up or down, might do to the behavior of the boat.) You should describe how the forces of the wind and the water work together to accelerate the wind surfer in a particular direction. You might describe why you can't go directly into the wind, no matter how hard you try.

Important Rules:

Key Suggestions:


Possible Term Paper Topics

A FEW TERM PAPER TOPICS FROM PREVIOUS SEMESTERS All of these topics can form the basis for a good term paper. This list is not at all comprehensive. It is taken from the topics chosen by students in previous semesters. Some topics are certainly better than others. Some depend on physical concepts not discussed in this semester's material and may be difficult for you to do well. There are many other fine topics that do not appear below. -- Lou Bloomfield

Acetylene Lamps

Acoustic Guitars

Aerosol Cans 

Aerosol Sprayers

African Drums

Air Brakes 

Air Hockey

Airbags

Amusement Park Rides

Archery

Artificial Hearts 

Audio Speakers

Ball Point Pens

Ballet

Baseball Pitching Machines

Basketball

Basketball Shoes 

Beautification

Beer Kegs

Beserker 

Bicycle Helmets 

Billiards

Blimps/Dirigibles

Blood Circulation

Blowguns 

Boats 

Bobsledding 

Boomerangs

Bowling

Breakdancing

Bungee Jumping

Burglar Alarms 

Butane Lighters 

Cable Cars 

Can Openers 

Cannons 

Canoeing

Capuccino Machines

Car Accidents

Catamarans

Catapults

Cell Phones

Chainsaws

Cheerleading

Clouds

Coffee Makers

Combines 

Compound Bows

Congas

Croquet

Crossbows 

Crumple Zones

Curling Irons

Dancing 

Darts

Dehumidifiers

Discus 

Dishwashers 

Diving Boards

Doorbells 

Drums 

Electric Blankets

Electric Fencing 

Electric Guitars

Electric Irons 

Electric Lawnmowers

Ergometer

Escalators 

Espresso Machines

Fax Machines

Field Hockey

Fire Alarms

Fire Engine Water Pumps

Fire Extinguishers 

Fishing

Fishing Poles

Flip-Flops

Flutes

Fly Fishing

Foosball

Football 

Geothermal Heating And Cooling Systems

Gliders

GPS

Golf 

Guitars

Gumball Machines 

Guns

Gymnastics

Gymnastics Vault

Gyroscopes 

Hair Dryers

Hammocks

Hang Gliders 

Harpsichords

Helicopters

High Jump

Holograms

Hot Tubs 

Hot Water Heaters

Hover Craft 

Human Hearts

Humidifiers

Humidifiers 

Hurdles

Hurricanes

Hydraulic Theatres 

Hydrofoils 

Ice Cream Makers

Ice Hockey

Innertube Water Polo

Jai Alai

Javelin Throwing

Jet Skis

Judo

Jump-Starting A Car

Kayaks

Kites

Lacrosse

Lava Lamps

Lawn Mowers

Lawn Sprinklers

Locks

Luge

Mechanical Pencils 

Metal Detectors 

Microphones 

Motorcycle Jumping

Mousetraps

Night Vision Equipment

Oboes

Oscillating Fans 

Overhead Projectors 

Paddle Ball 

Paint Sprayers

Paintball Guns

Parachutes

Pencil Sharpeners 

Percolators

Pez Dispensers

Phonographs

Pianos

Pinball Machines

Ping-Pong

Pneumatic Screwdrivers 

Pogo Sticks

Pointe Ballet

Pole Vaulting

Polgraphs

Polo

Pool

Pool Filter Systems 

Popcorn

Potato Guns

Printing Presses

Professional Wrestling

Prosthetics

Punting

Racquetball

Radar Guns 

Radar 

Radiators

Record Players

Remote Controls

Revolvers

Rifles

Rock Climbing 

Rollerblades

Rowing

Rugby

Running

Running Shoes

Sailboats

Sailing

Scissors Jacks 

Seatbelts 

Seismographs

Sewing Machines 

Ships 

Shot Put

Shotguns

Skateboarding

Skiing

Skydiving

Sleds 

Slinkys

Smoke Detectors

Snowboarding

Soccer 0

Solar Heating

Sonar

Space Heaters 

Speakers

Speech

Speedometers

Spray Cans

Springboard Diving 

Stage Lighting 

Staplers 

Stealth Jets 

Steam Engines

Steam Locomotives

Submarines

Sunglasses

Surfboards 

Surfing

Swimsuits

Swingsets

Tattoo Pens

Tennis

Thermos

Thunderstorms

Toaster Ovens

Toasters

Toilets

Tornadoes

Torpedoes

Tower Cranes 

Toy Cars 

Track And Field

Trebuchets

Trumpets

Tubas 

Ultralights

Umbrellas

VCRs

Vending Machines 

Voice

Volleyball

Wakeboarding

Washing Machines

Water Bongs

Water Clocks 

Water Guns 

Water Pumps

Water Skiing

Water Wheels 

Weight Machines 

Weightlifting

Wind Surfing

Wind Tunnels 

Windmills

Winter Coats

Wrestling 

Xylophones

Yo-Yos

   








Forbidden Term Paper Topics

The following objects or topics are covered extensively in the lectures and textbook for Physics 105 and Physics 106. You would have difficulty writing a paper on one of these subjects that is truly your own work. It would be just too easy and too tempting to copy my approach, my thoughts, even my words. My lectures and notes should be only part of the reference materials you use for your term paper. Find an object that I do not discuss directly in depth and use similarities between your object and some of mine to identify the physical principles that make your object work. -- Lou Bloomfield

Air Conditioners

Air Purification

Airplanes

Audio Amplifiers

Automobile Engines

Automobiles

Balloons

Baseball

Batteries

Bicycles

Bumper Cars

Cameras

Carousels

CD or DVD Players

Centrifuges

Clocks

Computers

Electric Motors

Electrical Power Distribution

Electrical Power Generation

Electronic Air Cleaners

Elevators

Falling Balls

Flashlights

Fluorescent Lamps

Frisbees

Glass

Heat Pumps

Incandescent Light Bulbs

Knives

Lasers

Laundry

Magnetic Resonance Imaging

Magnetically Levitated Trains

Medical Imaging

Medical Radiation

Microscopes

Microwave Ovens

Nuclear Reactors

Nuclear Weapons

Oil Refineries

Optical Fibers

Paint

Pipe Organs

Plastics

Radio

Ramps

Refrigerators

Rockets

Roller Coasters

Scales

Scuba

Seesaws

Skating

Sunlight

Swimming

Tape Recorders

Telephones

Telescopes

Television

The Sea

Thermometers

Thermostats

Vacuum Cleaners

Violins

Water Distribution

Water Faucets

Water Purification

Water, Steam, and Ice

Wheels

Woodstoves

Xerographic Copiers





Expectations:

I will attach a grading sheet to your term paper and use that sheet to assign a grade. Physics 105hs  is a physics course and your term paper will be judged according to how effective it is at explaining the physics and physical concepts that make the object work. In particular, the A range papers will be those that get right to work discussing physical concepts in their object and work efficiently to cover many of the important ways in which physics contributes to the workings of their object. B range papers will be those that discuss some physical concepts, but either bog down while discussing only a few physical concepts, have significant mistakes in them, or waste too much space on non-physics issues such as history, users' manuals, description, or engineering instructions. C range papers will be those that fail almost completely to discuss physical concepts and instead dwell on history, users' manuals, description, or engineering instructions. If your paper doesn't contain much that you learned in this course (or its equivalent), you probably haven't written a physics paper.

PART 1: DISCUSSION OF PHYSICAL CONCEPTS AND PHYSICAL PRINCIPLES

q       The paper is extensive in its discussions of physical issues involved in the object.
q       The paper frequently discusses physical issues involved in the object.
q       The paper discusses physical issues involved in the object.
q       The paper occasionally discusses physical issues involved in the object.
q       The paper rarely discusses physical issues involved in the object.
q       The paper never discusses physical issues involved in the object.

PART 2: PARTICULAR ACHIEVEMENTS OF THE PAPER

q       Well structured so that the reader has a good sense of where the paper is heading.
q       Well written so that the paper is pleasant to read.
q       Nicely packaged, enhancing the content without wasting words.
q       Well thought out so that it appears complete and thorough.
q       Degree-of-difficulty: your topic was especially difficult and your grade has been raised accordingly

PART 3: FLAWS IN THE PAPER

q       Too much description (a small amount is fine).
q       Too much historical perspective (a small amount is fine).
q       Too much packaging (packaging is the condiment, not the meal).
q       Too little attention to physics and physical issues of how the object works.
q       Mistakes in the application or understanding of physical principles.
q       Vague in the application of physical principles to the object.
q       Too short (content substantially less than 5 pages).
q       Too long (paper, excluding figures, substantially more than 5 pages).
q       Mistakes in grammar and/or spelling significantly detract from the paper.
q       Poorly written, making it difficult to read.
q       The paper fails to give the reader a clear overall picture of what is being discussed.
q       The paper has little or no structure and rambles.

PART 4: THE GRADE (Before deductions for lateness)

q       A+ (93.3) An extensive, accurate, and comprehensive explanation of the physical principles that make the object work, nicely packaged in an unusually readable paper.
q       A (90) A good, accurate, and comprehensive explanation of the physical principles that make the object work. Well structured and with very few flaws.
q       A– (86.7) A good, accurate, and fairly thorough explanation of the physical principles that make the object work. Well structured and with few flaws.
q       B+ (83.3) An accurate explanation of most of the physical principles that make the object work. Only minor flaws.
q       B (80) A fairly accurate explanation of many of the physical principles that make the object work. Only minor flaws.
q       B–(76.7) A fairly accurate explanation of some of the physical principles that make the object work. The paper includes some significant flaws.
q       C+ (73.3) An adequate explanation of a few of the physical principles that make the object work. The paper includes some significant flaws.
q       C (70) The paper largely avoids explaining the physical principles that make the object work and includes some significant flaws in any such attempts.
q       C– (66.7) A paper that completely avoids explaining the physical principles that make the object work and is significantly flawed in general.
q       D (60) A paper that completely avoids explaining the physical principles that make the object work and is extensively flawed in general.

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